I think the creation of the internet has many positives and also negatives. I want to first talk about the benefits of the internet.
A major aspect of really good internet has to do with easy access to information we have now. You can download all kinds of books for free, download music, watch online movies, read the newspaper, buying things etc. You can buy many things with "one click", Which is pretty good. I remember when I was small and had no internet at home was more difficult to do my homework, my nephew now has classes where used Internet sites to learn English or do math! With Internet access you can also meet many new people. In your city, your country, even from distant countries. Communication is faster and distances do not matter, you can always stay connected and in touch with people who are far from you.
On the other hand, meeting people over the internet is risky: you can get unlucky and meet crazy people, pedophiles, scammers. Finally you never know who is the person behind the screen. For the kids, the internet can be an easy way to find violence and pornography and so I think that parents should be aware of what your children watch on internet.
I think the internet is a double-edged sword. On one side you have communication, fluency, knowledge easily accessible and on the other you distrust, violence and scams. Internet is a good tool only if you know how to use it in the best way to maximize your profits. Otherwise it may even be dangerous.
Camila:
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Today I will write (on) ABOUT the internet.
I think the creation of the internet has many positive(s) and also negative(s) POINTS?. I
Buy(ing) things etc.
…IT was more difficult to do my homework, my nephew now has classes where THEY use(d) Internet sites to learn English or do math!
.… For (the) kids, the internet .…
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